When we got home we didn’t
spoke about what happened earlier. The next day, it was raining cats and dogs.
I didn’t want to get wet in my way to school. So, I took the old man’s umbrella
and walked to the bus stop. There I was, waiting for my bus under the umbrella
when a lady crossed by carrying her baby. She looked worried and I realized
that he was poor and that her baby was sick. I felt very sorry for them and
offered her the umbrella. “Take it” – I said - “You need it more than I do”. She
smiled to me happily “Thank you” – she said and continued her way to the
hospital. I didn’t get a penny but I got a mother’s gratitude and her smile. It
worthed a lot more than a penny.
Soon I forgot about the
umbrella but one day I was waiting for my bus to go back home after school. It
was raining but the bus stop had a roof and a bench. I didn’t notice when an
old man sat next to me, but I do noticed the umbrella that he had in his hand.
I looked at him and I got amazed. He was the little old man that sold my mother
the umbrella and he was carrying it with him!
-Hi there- he said – Yes, it
is me and yes, this is the umbrella- He laughed loud.
-How come…?-
-I don’t know, you pretty
young lady- he answered before I could ask him –It always return to me. And in
its way back it performs beautiful acts.
I was astonished.
-I guess someday it will
leave me, as well as it came to me in the first place. Who knows? Maybe someday
it will return to you… I think that’s your bus honey-
Indeed, my bus was coming. I
got on the bus. When I looked outside, he was already offering the umbrella to a young guy. I'm sure that I will be seeing that umbrella again!
Some changes you should do:
ResponderEliminar-"She looked worried and I realized that he was poor and that her baby was sick."
I'm pretty sure you are talking about a lady so write SHE, for god sakes!
-"It always return to me."
I believe it's "returns"...
Concerning your story, that oldman, always giving his umbrella to young people, hope hes intentions are good!
Grammatical errors, correct them.
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